My Scratch Progress

My Passion Project

Present Tense Writing

It is mid-day the sun is out with no clouds to be seen , The city was like a ghost town. The breeze from the wind is just pleasant . I smell warm hot dogs and I couldn’t resist just getting one so I glance and glaze with my peculiar hungry eyes . I finally spot the stand just across the road and rush to go buy one but there is no one there so I had to do something risky.

I feel tense and sweat appears down my head. I look around the road and see no one . So just take a peek at the hot dogs with my hands nice, and big . I just grab a hot dog  to have a taste . I taste it and I feel like I’m in heaven    . I have  another just for the road but I couldn’t handle it . I grab another and another .

Suddenly the man that was running the stand came . He looks very firm , with a red hat . I put the hot dogs behind my back trying to clutch the hot dogs to my back .

Once I was finally in the clear I took the hot dogs from my back and stuffed it in my mouth as I walk down the path. But that’s what I thought .

Success Criteria:	Peer:	Self:
Present Tense	✓	✓
Intro, body, conclusion	x	x
Descriptive detail	✓	✓